Well that was probably the most intense thing I ever saw. The start was probably an intro to this weird "faces" series... but the intro was ridicolously long. I'd suggest shortening it down by tons. One thing that gets me is that the graphics are, well, absolutely terrible. It doesn't seem like you put any effort into it at all. But every how bad you are at drawing, if you take your time you can surely be able to create something more comfortable to watch- I mean, I can hardly read the text when you draw it. Another thing is the audio stuff- the low quality stuff I don't mind, but you're having the volume-in control way too high when you record the voices, so the audio's clipping and distorting all over.
At least you have some good points in the humor category and stuff, so it's at least almost half decent :D