good , good

a great concept boarder line awsome. but you should have continued the idea.

great work keep it up and good will come

Impressive for a first

Very good for your first submission. I suggest next time you add a preloader (I made the mistake of not doing that on one of my blammed flashes), and probably continuing the story a bit more.

Keep up the good work.

Is this really your first?

Way to go man! The animation isn't super-duper, but it's a really cool idea and I think you could do a lot with this. This isn't the work of a very experienced flash animator, but this way better than any first submission flash I've ever seen. Keep this up.

WOW

This is great for a first submission. Keep it up!

5/5

Interesting.

Even though the artwork was poor, the premise was interesting. With a bit more work, I can see this becoming a good series!

~KamakaziSparow~