Still doing good
I love that you gave us a better view of the city and that you kept the storyline interesting. Also I noticed that you give us a little more time to read the subtitles instead of having to just read as fast as we could and understand later.
Anyways you haven't failed yet on these episodes, atleast to me anyway, that says to me that you definitely got something good going for ya.
On the plus side, the story is interesting, and as far as I know original. The artwork is also superb; the visuals are fantastic. The slide-show style of presentation allows for you to really soak it all up.
However, due to this rather unique style, I often have trouble figuring out what is going on some scenes. Some of them tend to very busy and I can't make out what is what. This problem has somewhat diminished as the series has progressed though. Also, as some people have mentioned, the text goes by rather fast at times. I happen to be able to read fast... but I'm sure for a lot of people this could be an annoyance.
I'll be honest, this is certainly not one of my favorite series, but I enjoy the artwork a lot. Keep it up.
I will definitely give you props for the inventive form of storytelling. The only thing I didn't like about this flash is that the words go by too fast or are noticeable until too late. Good work, though.
YAY Another great episode!!!
big fan!! just one note...we need more hot female charaters!! lol...just a thought!! :p...O O O And maybe Austin powers...and and Dr . Evil and and mini me....and and maybe ma pic ^_^ yes yes!!!..mwhahaha!!!....Oscar nomination here we come!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!! lol
looks really good but....
it looks too much like a comic and its hard to keep focus.
you should put bubbles on the characters to make it look like an awsome comic book
other that that good story and art