keep up the good work because its truly amazing to watch!
nice and smooth but still a problem
It's very nicely done but there is only one tiny problem and that's the yellow colour you can't hardly see the ereadings so can you please make for the last one another colour like black to make a contrast with the white background.
All feedback is good for us!
We can take it onboard for the next set of episodes we make, to improve Thamesis :)
Since my latest reviews have all been deleted I decided only to write reviews for good flash like yours. The story is pulling me closer to my pc screen than my eyes allow and the graphics are unique and very pleasant. I enjoyed every single episode and like InsaneSmilie I've been waiting for episode 5 since the very moment ep4 stopped playing. Of course I would enjoy more episodes but as it seems there is sadly only one more, right? Anyway, one thing bothered me a little and that is the missing control buttons or anything like it. I would love a play button in the beginning and some controls during the comic. something like pause or next page you know? I think that the sounds could be improved a little by adding more dramatic music but it was allright already!
briefly I was looking forward to this episode and it was well worth waiting for it!
you created a very unique style with this series and i like that you keep it in the flashes. your way of narrating the story keeps the viewer interested. there's always happening something on the screen. and even though you use little to no animations in this (as in: it's mostly a picture slideshow) you manage to create a "movie" in the head of the viewer, due to the awesome graphics and the sounds you use.
i think i already mentioned that in the review of episode 4: no voice acting!
i still think this would be even better with some voice acting!
you created a very unique flash-series. in my opinion this is the best series on newgrounds so far! i am really curious how the story goes on!
Never been so excited to see a flash animation come onto the portal and now I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one. This is a great series, the text does go a bit fast, but that okay, gives me an excuse to watch it twice. Eagerly awaiting episode 6.