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remove the space
it just gets the message across
don't submit crap
because it will be blamed
and wastes peoples times
A step in the right direction
I thought it was funny and the animation was pretty good
an average selection for funny music though
I'm not saying it was bad. I mean, it was definitely fast. Also, i can tell it was rushed, somewhat . I time think to be better, it just needs more time, duration, and more songs like bleeding mascara ^_^ (I just kind of sat and listened to that. Well music choice)
An ironic message?
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"Don't upload crap to the portal." Well, this definently isn't by far the crappiest it gets, but I'm sure that this couldn't have taken more than a few days or so to animate, if so. I mean, I usually only make movies for newgrounds if they're at least 2 minutes long, and usually take at the VERY least 3 weeks, minus the one time I made a movie in 4 days (Without doing much else besides going to school, sleeping, etc.... <_<) and that one I don't consider very good...
Okay, now things that relate specifically to the animation: You could make a few things smoother, perhaps add a few frames or so to the walking animation of the swf. Also, when the text appears at the end, I'd suggest to make it stop moving. It's readable, sure, but it's annoying and kinda lazy in my opinion. Another thing you can do is make something enter really fast, then move hardly at all, then exit quickly. Kinda like in movie trailers sometimes?
Yeah I rushed on this...
I can never seem to finish anything, so i rushed a bit.
seems nice. try harder next time, yet. because you need more inform in story
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