This was good. The animation was decent and the plot line was good, but don't go giving too many ideas.
short but sweet
suspenseful :) makes me eager to see what's going to happen next. great storyline, too.
Good ideas and potential
To me it seams worth to develop it. Especially the killer could have an inner abyss, a kind of distortion that makes him express his self to society like he does.
I recognized you making the music not that overactingly dramatic but it needs a bit more darkness because the story has potential it would be a pity if it would lake giving the viewer the atmosphere you had in mind for this animation.
The van Gogh painting "The Starry Night" made me curios and for sure it is a good teaser too.
The picture isn't a random thing, if people keep their eyes open they'll be able to get it in the future episodes!
good luck in the contest! Hope you place, that was cool. I liked it.
yeah I liked it...
I do agree it could have been a bit long with some more killing but hey leaves it open for a series right?! :)
Keep it going!
(P.s. The paper shows a pic of a different victim to the first guy you see killed so the title must be for what we see as the start of his rampage and then the papers for what we don't see after....)
After killing the first guy, he goes on a killing spree, and that scene with the newspaper is set 3 months after the 1st murder.
Nice review, thanks! :D