A little short but it was nice.
lol the wave rides in
well not bad but it needs some work I think you have some good things ahead of you please at least try to take some time reading the submissions maybe try not to rush so hard if you did
Hmm, I swear I tried, but couldn't understand what you meant....read the submissions?
If you feel like it, explain it better on a PM!
This was interesting.
The story was nice and original, too short though.
Good luck in the competition.
nuthen new it was not bad nor was it good it is just kinda there i hope the second 1 is beter
hopfuly Dasneviano will follow through with this.
looks like it would make a good serial(no pun).HAPPY HALLOWEEN
Dasneviano says he will follow through with it! :D