wow

the snakes looked like crawling penises with tounges

lol

It was ok...I mean it wasnt all that. bad, it did get a little monotonous after a little while because you kept repeating things over and over, but even if the animation WAS simple, it wasnt a bad idea.

Next time think of more things to put into the vid and take your time.

SNOOZE

That was slow and boring.
These time limits are retarded, instead taking a lot of time and making something worthy, its just repetitive crap.

The only good time limits are Tim Frommeyer one's.

ok... here's the low-down.

You need to develop something interesting before submitting. don't make the menu screen look better than the flash itself. other than plot and animation, you should probably try a little more on the music. It was like it was on a poorly constructed loop. i know you did all this in one day, and that's pretty damn good. But imagine what you could do in say a week, or a month. you could be the best flash artist on newgrounds, and we'd never know because we saw this work you produced in a day and we become disinterested in anything else you've done. keep trying. I personally am terrible at flash, but i'm still practicing, and i'm teaching myself, and i have yet to submit anything. But i have watched a lot of flash on newgrounds. and if I voted on every one i ever saw i'd probably be a moderator by now.

10 days of effort

Really, u shouldn't rush smthing as delicate as flash, as it leads to uninteresting movies with no replay value. This, however, is wat you've done. Animation was average and the music was annoying.