Personally, I thought it was awesome.
Great characters, good plot, and it's a great base for plenty more episodes to come.
Reason it didn't get ten from me is 'cause I think that slower readers (of which there are many) may not be able to read the text fast enough before it goes. You can't really put in forward arrows, then it wouldn't be totally a movie.
Guess your only option is voices, since the text staying for longer would aggravate some viewers. Get a mic, yes?
Other than that, though, great performance. This could really go somewhere is my opinion.