Sorry but...
If anything this was a step back in quality from the last in every aspect.
Work on a story and your animation technique then submit something...
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The Adventures Of John Pt 2
John discovers a delicious new taste!
My second in the Adventures Of John series, a continuation from The Adventures Of John Pt 1. Unlike my later movies there are no voices, just speech bubbles. My later enstallments have audio.
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