not bad
need to get the whole concept across more quickly. The head banging stuff was cool , thats all the go these days. not bad
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Thought i would try my hand at some frame by frame animation =D i'm hoping to have it posed on the stationary world website =D. Do drop me a review =) i love reading them, good or bad, and it helps with the whole motivation side of things.
All voice and sound effects masterd (lol) by me and my brother, thanks Willie :)
oww no preloader?? lol 575kb :) dnt need one, Enjoy =D
thanks heaps
-Wynand
fucking stupid
you need to work on your gay ass animation and your so called cartoon is boring as fuck i can't believe i wasted my time watching this shit!!!
wynand responds:
coming from somone who has no contibution to newgrounds whatsoever... that aint so bad =) and i fixed it, its called SWD if you wanna check it out, still nonsensical but better than this one, but don't bother it would only waste your precious time
owww
i saw the 1bird wif 100stones title and though wow what a cool concept, but thats pretty much all thats good about this, i'm sorry mate but you'r going to have to work on your animation, and ur storytelling ability. and come up wif some cool more action packed things for me 2 look at... ow and work on ur english.. so in other words.. get betR engish, by diktinary. much mor betR animaton. goodluck =) i recon re use this concept, the 1bird 100 stones and think of some better things to do wif it.... cuz if u dnt i will =) stolen hehe
Senseless
You should REALLY add voices, subtitles or whatever you want to explain it. It's just a sleepy guy who calls up that weird thing and the guy ends up in a new office... it's just pointless...
wynand responds:
ok thanks heaps i'll keep that inmind for things to come. Make it make more sence basically lol. Basically the character rings up stationary world and they transform his office so he doesnt have to sustain self caused injury due to crappy stationary. but mayb i should get to making some good cartoons so you guys dnt have to sustain self injury due to my crappy story telling ability lol
neway thanks for the review
Frankly, I didn't like it
It made me laugh...at first...but for some reason I didn't find it at all funny after the Stationary World Direct thing happened. It could really use more of the first part of jaded office guy and less advertising. Perhaps something original although still funny.
wynand responds:
ok thanks for the review, yeah i would like for it to play on their website, i was trying to make it comical, sucks you feel that way but thanks :) i can try harder next time