Wow, Olimar knock off much? Very cool, idiot
Author Comments
This story is about Snuff, a Pilot who has a wife and two kids, and a tragic flight that will change their lives. I hope you like this submission, there are no voice overs, but it is still an interesting piece. This is merely episode 1, and if you are confused about the ending, well you will have to see episode 2 to understand just exactly what becomes of the characters.
p.s.
I am a new artist, just out of Florida, and just turned 14. i realize i need to learn a bit more about graphics, and trust me, im working on it.
listen this could have been better. Your recent work has shown potential but this has a lack of funk, night time, and the Fridays. better luck next time maybe
Stanpai responds:
Thank you for your heartfelt review. I think I've really come a long way since my first ever submission that DIDN'T get blammed. I used to vote 5 on it every single day to make sure it didn't die... what a wild ride.
Pretty good
This really wasnt your best work and I think you know that but overall I thought it was a pretty good flash and keep up the good work!
Its Ben
I got a NG account
Not Good.
The first thing that caught my eye was that you have very bad graphics. The entire flash looked as though it was done on MS Paint (Which I'm sure it was). Added to that was the fact that your storyline was short and confusing. I mean, you didn't exactly tell us why anything was happening other than the fact that he protagonist is a pilot who just happens to fly during horrible conditions (A licensed pilot would not have flown so recklessly). There was no background behind characters which added to the confusion.
My advice is that you learn a bit more about Flash and put more effort into making a storyline before submitting something like this.
Stanpai responds:
not MS Paint.
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3.85 / 5.00
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- Sep 25, 2007
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