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Snuff episode 1

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This story is about Snuff, a Pilot who has a wife and two kids, and a tragic flight that will change their lives. I hope you like this submission, there are no voice overs, but it is still an interesting piece. This is merely episode 1, and if you are confused about the ending, well you will have to see episode 2 to understand just exactly what becomes of the characters.


p.s.
I am a new artist, just out of Florida, and just turned 14. i realize i need to learn a bit more about graphics, and trust me, im working on it.

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Thank you for keeping up your early work. It could be quite tempting to delete what you previously made, though I think what you have created is extremely impressive and an amazing start. It gives great perspective and hope for newcomers like me to perhaps even reach the level of excellence that you have managed to achieve. Your dedication and respect for the craft are deeply respected by me. You have taken major steps in becoming the artist that you are today, and you deserve great praise. I offer you my sincere thanks for the amount of effort you have put into communicating your ideas, comedy, and feelings through the visual medium.

Nice to see you customized the preloader, giving it a good sense of personality. I think the animation is quite interesting. I was shocked by how the sound just pops in as the animation starts out silent. The characters are quite unique in their appearance. There is a setup and a scene that ends with the plane crash. The faces look like a caricature of, stylized anime characters, combined with features resembling an onion. I'm not sure if the mouth is constantly open or if it's depicting big lips.

Wow, Olimar knock off much? Very cool, idiot

listen this could have been better. Your recent work has shown potential but this has a lack of funk, night time, and the Fridays. better luck next time maybe

Stanpai responds:

Thank you for your heartfelt review. I think I've really come a long way since my first ever submission that DIDN'T get blammed. I used to vote 5 on it every single day to make sure it didn't die... what a wild ride.

Pretty good

This really wasnt your best work and I think you know that but overall I thought it was a pretty good flash and keep up the good work!

Its Ben

I got a NG account

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1,799
Votes
10
Score
3.78 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 25, 2007
8:40 PM EDT