i liked it more than the first one
my favorit part was the owned again
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i just made thisone... yay 2 eps released in one day...
this is like the intro story of The Magic Key but it's released after Ep. 1 so i called it Ep. 2 =D
Have fun watching!
Sonix:
Ok, we still need alot of practise... (Well, mostly me, i did most of the animations...)(Brain112: but i can animate too if i wanted too XD)
But, for beginners, Where pretty good right?
Please, if you review, offer constructive criticism that will be useful to us.
(Tell us what could improve.)
Well..
Seems like it might get interesting later, and it made me laugh a little, so it did it's job.
Brain112 responds:
thx ^_^
I enjoy the font of your text.
What is that font called?
Brain112 responds:
It's called Dark Crystal but there are some things missing like = ,: ," ,'
so that sucks but it's still a cool font
Too short
This was too short and it didn't make much sense either, try to have a story of some sort wich naturally makes it longer because it takes more time to tell.
I haven't watched the other part but I bet it would've been alot better if you took a week to do like a 1 minute long film with a beginneing, a middle and an end.
Also get it a bit lighter, it was pretty dark and the cam's quality was kinda bad but I guess there isn't much to do about that.
Brain112 responds:
well... lol my friend makes it up as he starts animating XD
but yea i think ill animate the next episode (i have a bit more experience than him)
and about the cam i think there's something wrong with the properties =/ ill try to fix it at the next episode
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