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I had some time on my hands so i did this
Your Getting it.. but..
Nice movie, however I might suggest a few things to tweak it up.
1. Change the movie size, so you dont see the sides of white.
2. Use a different font, that is easier to read if you are not going to have voices.
3. Make sure your movie clips, (such as the Arms) are a little more fluent.
Spend a little time polishing the movie to clean up stray lines after you done.. and you have youself a decent plot and movie. Good work, you can do good I am sure of it.
Hey did by any chance you based your storyline on 1984 the book by George Orwell cos the posters and stuff make it seem like that
that was my insperation
i read it last year for class and i loved it
to be honest it needs a bit of work and some speech .. but apart from that it caught my eye ..
not enough effort
first of all the concept of BIg Brother...everyones watching has been used so many times...i wouldnt be bad if you actually made this flash look a little nicer...its very annoying when the animation and backgrounds doesnt fit the screen its really easy to fix...also the text was hard to read..fix most of these problems and record some voices and try again
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