I LIKE IT
MAINLY BECAUSE I MAKE STRANGE NOISES IN IT.
Author Comments
This didn't take me to long to make, it this would be my second Flash attempt.
It's really not that great, but I've seen some other Flashes here on NewGrounds so I thought I would make one and submit it here.
It's about me, and my friend Crow in a small SSBM fight.
Keep working
When I saw the file size and name I knew I had a blam here, but I was wrong. The sprite animation was pretty good and the voice over was above average. I think if this author could use the same formula but make it a little longer and add a little more humor, he could have some serious portal worthy flash.
Eh. Alright.
One of the only problems were the voices.
they were too low, or too quiet, or too loud.
fix it.
and a minor this is that you should make it longer.
Well you definitely need lots more practice, but
you could have also done a whole lot worse too. Aa E for effort5/5 and 10/10 is an early Christmas gift. HOHOHO
Yoshy-Ryu responds:
I rofl since I put had 'JewGrounds' in the preloader..
Thanks for your review, dude.