At least I dont feel like that's time I'll get never back. This series has serious potential. Im not going to gripe about the quality, Im sure there will be plenty of people that'll do that already. Honestly, as long as you keep plugging away and honing your skills, it can be good. Also, I'd suggest fine-tuning the timing as well. Things seemed to lag a bit in dialogue. (If there was such a 'dialogue') Overall, it wasnt bad, I can see potential in it, but it still wasn't great. YET.
Finally! someone gets it! you know that bit in the commentary where I said "The later ones will be better so stop your bitching"? that's what I was talking about! I'm not saying that this is that good but I think that I can make it better.
that was ok i guess but it took a little to long with the knife underwater part
Oh yeah David? Well I've just got one thing to say to that: FUCK YOU MONKEY BOY!!!!! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!
Well dude its not the best, but I like it, its not super great, not is it super bad, I like the idea of vegtables battling utensiles, and I'll I have to say is work on the animation, and try to get so voice acting in.
Um... interesting story.
My irk with this flash, the characters... are truly... sporadic...
Granted, the tomato has his motivation, but the knife had like three different character changes, Brain seizure aside, nice effort.
Hey that's not nice! (the part about the brain seizure, the rest of the review was fair) I've had brain seizures, it's not fun to wake up to the ambulance ppl putting you on a stretcher, giving you oxygen, wheeling you down the driveway to the ambulance and your family telling you that you had a seizure... nor is finding out after having to have an EEG and an MRI that the seizures were the result of a brain tumour and having to go to the hospital in Sydney to have brain surgery. But you know what IS fun? Finding out after the surgery that the tumour was benign!!! If you want to see picture of the stitches in my head go to atomic-chicken.net
right. its a weird animation, but good enough. my advice would be to not just roatate the symbols, actually change them around and stuff. for example, when the knife was looking into the sink after the first knife died, it could have just bowed a bit insted of tilting the hole thing. (wen ur looking down, do u just move your head, or do you go on a total 75 degree slant)
well thanks I'm glad you didn't hate it but a knife is stiff and doesn't really have a head.