You want tips to improve?
You want tips to improve? Make a fucking flash longer than 10 seconds without stupid sounds that you didn't even record.
Author Comments
3rd one of its kind, this one is better i think.
two things to know before voting:
1. its ment to be short; short and pointless... thats my style, you don't like it? piss off
2. DON'T RIGHT REVIEWS IF: THEY ARE NOT HELPFUL or BAGING OUT THE FLASH OR ME WITHOUT TIPS ON
HOW TO IMPROVE
its just annoying when you say its crap and thats it, and no-one thinks your cool, 'wow you typing
mean words with a keyboard, ouch'
thanks, dnt mean to offend anyone by that, enjoy!
Helpful hints.
Learn to draw better and use less anoying sounds. You could also try a little character development because I couldn't relate to the characters at all.
Be an artist.
It's Oright
For some reason this reminds me of Ren & Stimpy but maybe its because of your style and the sounds. It's a little random, which seems humorous now days! Good Job!
Funny stuff
The animation itself is funny. And if that's your style to keep things short then stick with it. But with a short animation you should focus more on the visual quality of the flash. Spending more time on the graphics will show that you put alot of effort into the clip. Then the fact that it's short won't be as much of an issue.
Not bad
Pretty powerful sneeze there =P
One thing though the audio kinda messed with my head... Was it supposed to keep fading to the right or are my headphones just stuffing up?
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2.00 / 5.00
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- Sep 18, 2007
- 2:37 AM EDT