Good
The best of 10 days trial, and the music was very good (it is the music from Need For Speed, when the police is pursuiting you).
Dont make more 10 days tryal, or 5 days trial, or whatever, take your time so you can do better things!
Last episode for this month, oh my god, I realy don't have to do '10 Days Trial'. I'll fix it and do something like 5 Days Trial.
So, anyway, this is episode 2 of Mr.Black. It is realy short ( at all it is short movie :] ).
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And for those who do not understand the end: he has triped.
Hope u'll enjoy this. :)
-iLott
Good
The best of 10 days trial, and the music was very good (it is the music from Need For Speed, when the police is pursuiting you).
Dont make more 10 days tryal, or 5 days trial, or whatever, take your time so you can do better things!
Thx, yea, and I know about a music, I got a folder full of this shit, but I dont know who puts it in here :)
it was pretty good
Make more of a story unles its senceless violence
Okay
Could've used more story dude.
It could use some work, dude.
I would suggest cleaning up the image of Mr Black and improving the similarties between him and 007. There was no story. Fix that for sure. Also, make it more clear that he tripped-use a different view?-so you won't have to clear it up in the comments section. I liked the red vs black deal, because it was easy to understand. \
Verdict: Fix it up and then I'll vote for it. Denied.
meh
it definatly wasnt great... the story was almost non existant... although i havnt watched any of your other things *shrugs* but all it seemed like to me was random acts of violence and not even that good of violence. the first scene where he appears he could have easily been blown away. i'm just stating my oppinion