Okay, I think your movie was... hmm it had good points and bad.
It has a lot of potential to be extremely good but i think some qualities are keeping you from reaching it.
1. Sound quality is pretty bad, it also got fairly segmented so it felt more like it was over rehearsed and not like it was being said just spontaneously.
2. Voice acting was moderate but i didn't really believe most of it.
3. Animation was pretty good but sometimes it was below average.
4. Some jokes were really just below bar, like the gay person its not that i care if he hit the gay guy just didn't particular find it funny. The Splinter Cell one could've been extremely good if you'd not of taken it too far.
But with the bad stuff out of the way i'll give my good points. Its a fairly original idea, with some interesting plots. It can be funny at points and laugh out loud at some more places. There's good designs of background and characters and a variety of different voices.
So yeah, i'm hoping you can improve this for the 2nd one