Primal War 14

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The 14th chapter is on the side story of the Princess and the turning point for the Beasts .You might have to see Primal war 10 and the end of 11 for the earlier parts of the story.This episode is surely the longest of the set. (about 5 min long)but I hope you enjoy .



I found it a bit fuzzy in the middle but otherwise it was great

It was generally good pice of work

However, there is some parts to improve bit, like character perspectives & animation - wich wasn't that bad in the end, just need bit more improving thats all. Story itself was told good, it was fair easy enough to tell where you was and doing what.

In general, i liked this sprite-movie - but there is needed some improving in some areas.

Good work, keep it up!

A nicely told story...

Just finished watching the series from start to end, and it's nice to follow the progress you have made in animation experience (although I believe your story is better told as a comic than a flashanimation). Here is a few of my thoughts of the series:
+ The scenery is beautiful, absolutely stunning, throughout the series
+ Your characters began as nicely drawn and they are steadily improving
- In the story you tend to show only the parts that drives the plot forward, well except for ep8 where you put quite a lot of time showing of the women. A good story needs some 'off-time' from the plot sometimes, if you know what I mean.
- Oh, and try not to have ALL the women waiving their tail ALL the time, it bugs me down to the bone.

Other than that I like the series, keep up the good work!

Ah yes *claps happilly*

A fine, if not minimally required to be improved piece of work as always. Very good, very good. You have my respect, sir.

very good , suspense is killing me to see the next

so good as expected i cant wait till 15

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4.21 / 5.00

Sep 10, 2007
6:24 AM EDT