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not exactly the best flash ever but good enough to get a 3!
Author Comments
This is the second installment to the first video of mine Bob and Jim the Moron, still not as good as other peoples but I tried. Please watch the First one before watching this, or you won't entirely get it.
Not an animation masterpiece. . .
but, it was still not too bad. The dialog was done pretty good and I thought that you showed some potention with this cartoon. Just keep working on improving the art and I think things will turn out pretty good. I would suggest maybe using more free hand drawing with the characters instead of the line and circle tool.
finalfant111 responds:
Thank you, I wll do that. Funny thing is, I"m did this flash on a Tablet PC so I can actually "FREE HAND" it for real, I just didn't entirely know how I should do it so I used the line and circle tool and just stretched everything, so I kind of just kept it basic, but I'll go back and see How I should do it, thanks
It's good audio
but really bad flash... sorry... 3/5 6/10 but still I voted for It's safety...
finalfant111 responds:
Thank you, I'm glad to hear the audio was better at least, the last one had bad audio, so its a good turn around, as for the bad flash, I kind of suck at drawing, I did everything from scratch and free hand it. I'm a little disappointed though, the posters at the beginning were actually linked to other web sites but NG blocked them, oh well. But again, thanks for the score, My hats off to you
Credits & Info
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- Score
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2.83 / 5.00
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- Sep 9, 2007
- 4:03 AM EDT
- Genre
- Comedy - Original