very good
yes i’m late but idc love the flash
Author Comments
I did this almost a year and a half ago to help promote a virtual series I was helping out on, now the virtual series has finally premiered at Monster Zero Productions.
The series follows the Story of Peter Parker as he becomes the Amazing Spider-man, forcing himself to play superhero, getting caught up in conspiracy that range from the crime filled street to the very highest level of the military, and trying not to act like a fool to Mary-Jane.
Feel free to check it out:
http://www.mzp-tv.co.uk/g &c/index.html
Decent
Okay,
This was a flash with that deserves a "decent" remark.
You obviously master the use of gradients, and the pencil tool. [Very realistic characters, big plus]
You're using great techinques, keep them up, and really, look around, try to steal some other techinques, etc.
But watch out: Your anatomy isn't top noch from time to time [quite horrible actually] and being a "super hero" flash, this is something really important.
Try to keep even the feet as a seperate symbol.
Also, your perspectives seems to be off alot. Try sketching something on paper [use a center point, and draw all outlines towards mentioned point] and then draw it out in Flash.
I don't know what your drawing tools are (mouse-tablet) but I don't think it'd be so hard for paper to virtual porting.
If using mouse, this works great, if tablet, just sketch in flash.
And the gradients, don't exagerate.
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Phail
I gave it a 4 just because Yellowcard was in it.
What are you, 12?
It wasn't funny.
The timing was horrible.
Their limbs were barely attached and gravity didn't seem to exist.
It pretty much lacked quality all round..
Perhaps next time pay more attention to detail and come up with something remotely original. Research some decent animation.