This is my first attempt of a submition, I worked hard on this really short movie of a movie I'd like to make but sadly I'm not experienced enough (that and I'm a tad lazy), anyways, I hope you like it and if anyone is interested in helping I'm open to suggestions.
P.S.:
Music 1 (c) to Nintendo
Music 2 (c) to Square enix (I guess)
Triforce (c) also to Nintendo
Cargoss (c) to me ^_^
P.S.2:
My apollogies, I just remembered for a comment down there, yes, the hallway is indeed infinite, I suppose I didn't express myself good enough there
Not great, but O.K. for a first timer.
You asked for sugestions. Here they are. Take your time when making these. If you put enough thought into it, you may find that it just takes time. For a good example, go to the flash portal and look for a movie called "Aladin 3150". That guy spent months on it. All in all I aplaud you for admiting your lack of experience, so I decided to give you one extra star than origanally. You have now gained some of my respect, and thats hard to do.
Great job
not bad for a first movie, the effects were better than I expected and the sound wasnt to bad either,
Some tips:
1 increase the volume of voices
2 that must of been a real long hallway, cuz most dont end in points like that.
Im little over critical, but great job neway, you should really practice your skills and work on that story.