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Another Bloody M23 Short

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Another funny short I made over a little more time than the last one.
Please review with constructive criticism, rather than pointlessly being a jackass.
This is construcive criticism:
...I think you could have done better with the graphics...
This is pointless:
...BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBLLLLLL LLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!!!!!!


P.S. Yes, this is the same commentary slightly modified. Deal with it.

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Do everything completely different next time

Ok u want constructive criticism, here u go:
*Do everything completely different next time.

*Practice drawing so u can illustrate it better.

*Likewise practice animating so u can animate it better.

*DO NOT use that irritating synthesized voice, tat reeks of the "clock crew" and everything dreadful that they represents.

*If the movie has to be 10sec or less, then at least make it a funny one-liner.

*Finely do not use misleading thumbnails which suggest the movie might actually be better than it is.

moo23 responds:

You want a response, here u go:
*No.

*No.

*Maybe.

*No.

*They're supposed to be funny, but you aren't as insane as me.

*No

*Fynrelllie, the clock crew aren't Dreadful, you just only watch SBC.

Bottom line, you suck. Actually, you're a pretty good animator, so I shouldn't be saying that.

srory man

sory it just wasnt good i mean it took 1 and a half min to load and i got 2 seconds youre work is slipping ither make it longer or make the file size smaler onestly i think that it wasnt worth voicing i might of liked it if it wernt so short o-well you are probobley gunna get blamed but not by a big amount..................... youve still got youre other flash movies enjoy em B-I

moo23 responds:

1. If it took 1.5 minutes to load, you might want to try using a computer that isn't older than you.
2. I need to include a second point (OCD, anyone?), so Y0U1_11<30R1<PR0/\/Z0RZ! LOLZ!

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Uploaded
Aug 31, 2007
8:32 PM EDT