Animation was fine even though a loop but if u want people to be excited about this you should show how it happends through the poems story
i dont really understand???
the poem itself was ok but on the morbid side but ok. what i dont understand is what it didnt explain well, in daylight his ok then when the night falls he turns in to a corpse?
i had to shorten the poem quite abit so thats probably why. Hes unhappy with his current life, so he wished for a better one. The crow takes his life away, so hes dead. When he awakens from his tomb he looks and feels better than ever before, only at day however when the moonlight hits, his true self is shown, or somethin like that. Like i said the poem is drastically shortened.
There were some pros and cons.
Pros: Good work on the poetry. I liked the visualization of the creepy character walking while reading the story. Spooky and exciting to read.
Cons: Animation:Poetry Ratio. Lag/Slow Feeling as Text scrolled.
I can't tell whether to grade on poetry, animation, or overall effectiveness.
I'm sorry if I grade low since I expected a little more watching than reading. I guess I wasn't in a reading mood.
hurt my eyes
Sorry man, put me to sleep and hurt my eyes trying to read the black writing on that background. Very beautiful drawings though, but presentation got to me. A voice reading it would have been cool, or more actions than just walking.
But still, very awesome drawings and love the dark theme and interesting poem.
it seemed to be lacking to me. The poem was good, but the flash was merely a man walking down a road. if you had the flash match the poem that woulda been better. even if it were just well drawn still frames. I dunno. I was left with a feeling of incompleteness. very anticlimactic. when the poem ended I was like, "oh, here comes the fla-....no, I suppose that was the flash....hm."