not bad
not bad dean, nice animation and everything but i could understand a word they said :P other wise i would of gve it 10.
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WARNING: LOUD AUDIO
hi all, this is my first clay animation ive been practicing for about a week now. sorry about the crap voices yes one of them is me (the one with no character) and the others my m8s and yes my voice is english that is y it is so crap.
anyways enjoy my first clay mation
and post suggestions on improving :D
Bleh....
Couldn't understand what they were saying...
not bad
It is not bad but there is not enough happening the blue one should screw over more clay figures into killing themselves for the coin and then you could make them all come back as zombies or something to ge te coin or something like that.
Anyway the voices where to bad I could here anything so try to work on that too
good idea though but just do more with it
claymation....on a flash site?
Graphics:0/10
Sounds:0/10
Story:1/10
Overall:0/10
If this was a claymation site, this film might have a place here. Although clay is hilarious, make a clay FLASH animation. Also, as you noted yourself, the sound quality is horrible. Work to fix that please. Also, I couldnt follow the storyline. The mangles voices didnt help that. I think you should remake this as a flash, then see how it does. I dont believe this will last long on NG.
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it was ok but the voices spoilt it alot. the problem isn't tha your english its that the sounds very fuzzy. improve the sound and it'd be great
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