Much Better!

Congratulations on another flash. This one was, as the subject says, a good deal more understandable and well uh... sounded then the first balls. Nice addition of the sight bars and the car noises and such. I thing I did notice though was that the cars noises were of many cars like a highway rather the just one as was on screen. The story was also better then the last and you managed to fit almost as much information and plot in that minute or so then you did in the 3-4 minutes of the first. So Congratulations on this and I will continue to look at your work as you go along!
P.S. I don't like aimlessly rating things highly, and I will try to judge things by what I feel is a reasonable score based on the content of the piece. Good Job though, six isn't a bad score.

This is a list of what bothered me.

The loop of the background traffic sound
Those walls/floor/anything in just one colour. Filling up large shapes with just one colour just isn't right.

Overall it looked like this was made in MS paint... Which is probably true. Use better image effects and work on getting voices and better sounds. Also I had no clue what it was about.

nice nice

Graphics:7/10
Sounds:6/10
Story:7/10
Overall:7/10

SOUND. Thank god. The inclusion of background noise was great. A little repetitive at times, it was there. There were some spelling issues in the flash, but things happen. I cant wait for the sequel. This is a very good concept and will be a popular flash. Keep up the good work.