I really like the artwork, but I'll echo some of the earlier criticism and say that the voice acting needs some work.
I love the style and the great motion sequences, the story seems to be coming a long nicely, even the presentation is phenomenal.
But the only problem is the characters. One is almost embarrassed by the main character's lack of a creative or even believable name, and I simply could not enjoy the flash as soon as he started talking. The voices of both "Schmorey" and "St. Peter" are just awful, and just add an overall corniness to an otherwise enjoyable flash.
But, these are your characters, and you're not likely to change those things now that the series has started. Just letting you know what really gets under my skin.
yeah we get that a lt. not the name thing tho.. personally, i think the corniness of the name is hilarious. and about the voice acting: were dutch, so english is not our native language.. we try:)
i like the way you mixed flash animation with photagraphy ingenious
Good revised version
This one is definitely different from the original episode 1, atleast in this one his reason crossing the street and getting hit by the bus kinda suits Corey (mind you he was making a beer run...).
Anyways that was kool and yes your graphics were much better on this one, eventhough the original wasn't bad either.
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I thought that the artwork was great! keep it up! By far one of the best artwork i've seen on ng.