tis not your best

U need him running after the orb... and maybe make it a bit longer... but cool stuff.

....

this is pretty bad.

art and storry are terrible, but the music is kinda ok.

all i know is id be too ashamed to submit something that is this bad

Good, a little too short

That was good, but you should make each part a little longer, it's way too short.

intriguing

you better not be yanking us around =P

very well

i like your stile, but you should read the story, for us... you see we, NG users, are very lazy, so by not doing that you will lose many points.

You should try to draw alitle bit bether... but keep praticing, you have almoust made one of my favorites! :D