ok, needs work.

it need to be longer, i can tell you worked hard though. good graphics, nice preloader,, but the jokes werent funny.

swanky

seems like the start of something that could be..ok. It's too short tho.

lolz

yay easter egg!

Good

It had great animation but it was a bit boring and short.
keep up the good work and you might make it to the front page with animation like that.

You could of Done Alot with this

This animation is really pointless, though the Graphics were good, it had no point whatsoever. And you could of made a Movie about something, a stick Movie would of done, which shooting and Explosions, though youv'e made a movie that might not pass judgement becouase you made somrthing totally Random. 7/10.