err...
... was it to be random? cuz it wasnt. anyways, i understood it, but didnt really like it too much. nothing personal
Author Comments
well ok, this is another flash I made over the summer. I will probably submit it to the haloween 2007 thingy, I mean why not. post rewievs and tell me how I could improve. thx for watchin and votin
assasinrabbit responds:
yeah it was meant to be random :D
k thx for the rewiev
wtf
that was the stupidest movie i ever saw
there honestley was no point to it
assasinrabbit responds:
wow, seems like you could do a thousand times better eh?
Random?
The animation feels like an attempt to create something random, but it has no cohesion. If you wre trying to create a prolonged awkward moment, you didn't quite reach it. The ambient sound in the background loops poorly. The voices were okay, but sounded staticy. You might also try backgrounds. Having your characters float in a void adds nothing to the flash.
assasinrabbit responds:
right, better backgrounds and less random
thx for the rewiev
????
the sound was poor and so was the animation
assasinrabbit responds:
yeah, thx. try saying something the people before you havent said
Subtitles
Please, use punctuation and caps when needed...and all that. Not that big a deal, but just looks better, that's all.
As for the voices, they did remind me of Twin Peaks, in a way. The pauses between lines sounded odd, though.
Not bad.
assasinrabbit responds:
thx, puncuation aint my thing but yeah il ad it in any other movies
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