It needs a DUH DUH DUH at the end...
Animation was alright. I only took off one point for that.
The art was real good though. I like the milky way mist crap
Good Job! 9/10
Author Comments
This is my first Flash cartoon. I basically kinda learned how the program worked as I made it. It's very simple and relies on a lot of tweens, and real "beginner" animations. So don't be too harsh, please :). Oh, and it's just part one of 3.....and for anyone that might be wondering, the audio files are from the lovely anime known as Twilight of the Dark Master.
wow
for your first flash i am blown away , i love aliens and i love this series
WOW
first flash cartoon? you blew my mind with this!!! your getting added as one of my favorite artists and I love the feel of this cartoon cute and creepy takes me back to watching E.T. for the first time as a kid! keep it up I'm gunna be looking for more of you and I'm going to watch part 2 right now!
Wow!
I loved it! I don't know if it'll be front paged or not, but it should be. What really got me was the mood music, awesome. But what I really really loved and thought was unique was the alpha effects you used in the space scene. Great work!
What a lovely first flash!
You actually took the time to learn about what you were doing, craft what looks to be a developable storyline, use some effects as well...kudos to you!! Would that other users who submit trashy knock-offs took a page from your book!