dude

u had some 10-second talent in there,
id like to see a longer cartoon by you

lol

That made no sense at all, but it was cool.

Neat

Nice style of artwork. This is a very artistic frame by frame animation. Not just lines flying around the place like some animations I can name. >.>
Keep it up.

it's like a HI-C commercial, that's a good thing

an accurate description i think, but it really was good, but i suggest doing an extended version with a heavier song