Needs actual animation
You didn't really animate anything. Just rotated and repositioned. Try doing at least basic animation (eye movements, facial expressions, etc.).
good lord this was lameass
were you on pot when you made this crap? i've never seen something so horribly drawn on Newgrounds in my life... and the script was just as bad, not to mention it wasn't even all the way in the window at times...
It was okay. The tweening could use some work though. And maybe some voice acting would hhelp.