Heres some advice:
If your gonna send something to NG, make it something to be proud of, not this slap-together-in-20-min crap. Seriously, theres enough people who do what your doing, and its just not cool. Or funny. If you want to make a movie, then MAKE A MOVIE, not any of this crap. Even if you suck at ACTUALLY ANIMATING, it's better to try and fail, than these worthless wastes of spaces. Either try, or get the hell out of the portal.