Ait short
This was cool, seemed abit on the short side though, but the animation
did roll on out, maybe to improve you could add some color and possibly
some backround effects, other then that it was decent.
Short but neat
~X~
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This is my first NG flash so I dont mind so much if it gets blammed. But still, this is a character introduction flash of a character named Jeff. (Frame by Frame - except the blue background, that isnt FBF)
EDIT: Thanks for all the comments, I have put some music/SFX in but its not longer. Thanks for not blamming! ;D
SFX - Super Smash Bros. Melee
Music - Pokémon Route 101 theme
poop
What can I say? The toon was boring.The whole thing was just plain dull. I would offer friendly advice as usual, but this one's a lost cause. Sorry.
Awesome!
Very nice, but it should hve been a bit longer. you have great potential, don't mess it up by making small animations like this. Make them longer, and you will go far! :D
I liked your style, but like I said, a little bit longer :)
It may sound that I am being harsh, but, as an animator myself, I know how long this would have taken, so great job on this! :D
Chappersman responds:
Thanks, but this one is kinda an introduction which is why its so short, more longer ones on the way!
Not bad
I liked the idea and I think with some practice and enhancements you could be great.
Chappersman responds:
Thanks, I hope I do get better ;D
not bad but not good.
I think you should work on it a bit more.
Chappersman responds:
Ok ;)
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