From such similarity from Adam's work, I just simply agree with RawrJeff. Who knows? Just keep working on it and you just might surpass Adam's work one day. This piece of work should be in the Brackenwood collection. I enjoyed it very much! Outstanding job! ^^
I hope i don't surpass him, because then who will i have to look up to?
thanks for the review :)
You obviously put a lot of effort in making this look good and it certainly does : )
I agree you can very well see where the resemblance to Adam Phillips' work, although he gets absolutely ever detail right. Your flash looked slightly more... - "scribbly" for lack of a better word. The drawings just weren't as smooth, but that's probably intended. But it doesn't matter, it looked great in its own way.
If one thing bothered me, then it would be the sound effects. There were a few obvious looping sounds in there that got somewhat annoying, and the sounds weren't always just right to fit with the animation.
That's just some of the good and bad, constructive criticism, you know ;)
But I did like it. This is among the best stuff on NG.
Keep it up :)
Thank you, i suppose i do have a scribbly sort'a style, i prefer it. Thank for the constructive criticism.
I can see that u put a lot of effort in this !! and by that I mean that the story is funny
the grpahics were nice( the shadings were the best ) and the sounds...
Its good this movie came in the Brackenwood collections! well done!
I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
U think those charcter are to hard for you to animate, the moves those charcter does is wierd. anyway is looks good!
I never said it was hard..
a style to the point where your charcter resembles one of Adam Phillips is ridiculous.
I'm all for taking inspiration from other sources, but that was just ridiculous.
He's a caveman not bitey