lol

that was not made by a flash artist , it was made by an eating pissing shitting fucking drinking smoking santa OR YOU!

Not that good.

The animation overall was pretty slacked with the background and the character design and the dialogue also wasn't good either,not saying the effort was terrible just have some better ideas and yeah have a little bit more effort in the animating department then it should be a lot better. :)

Eh?

Well, at least it left me with a better feeling than the real Harry Potter movies, I suppose.

Not taking the grey box from around Strawberry was the main bugbear in the animation department, not that I can say that the rest was so much better, though.

Voldemort's arrival was way too voerdone - the glass smashing noise was as if someone had just bulldozed a warehouse full of greenhouses and the whole "WTF Story" part which lasted twenty seconds was both unnecessary and extremely annoying.

I hope you come up with something better for Clock Day 2008

[Review Request Club]

Not that good.

Pros
-Some clickable things

Cons
-Unfunny random things
-Bad drawings
-Retarded things
-I had no idea that thing was Voldemort till the end

~Review Request Club~

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Well, I at least had good thoughts coming into this from the soundboard.

^^Needs Improving^^
This was really atrocious...where to start. First off, I don't understand why you left a gray box around SBC? I guess it's the limited capabilities of your Flash program, but in that case, you should have drawn him...not like it's that complicated. The whole scene where Voldemort shows up really turned me off. Especially since it lasted twenty seconds. The storyline was hard to follow...I had no idea that SBC died, and you just tried to lace this with a bunch of crappy, random Napoleon Dynamite humor, which did this no glroy.