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Greentown is in trouble

rated 4.11 / 5 stars
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Comedy - Original

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Aug 14, 2007 | 11:31 AM EDT

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


This one is the best flash from you. Quite funny, ok graphics and good character, but there's lack of storyline and animation could've been better. I'm looking forward to your next one.

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Lorkas responds:

Thank you. Though I wasn't quite proud in the making of this movie. But I got over it, and actualy finished.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

(title in work)

^^Good Points^^
Not a bad movie you made. The graphics were impressive. Nice shading and very nice FBF animations. Like the beginning, when the guy jumped in the air. Definitely some animating skill here.

^^Needs Improving^^
Not a great storyline. Didn't really develop much. I would definitely like to see much more work from you, but it needs to have a bit more of a storyline to it.

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Lorkas responds:

Hi! Thanks, that means alot to me.

Hmmm...In my opinion the Jumping scene was the best, but I was dissapointed about the last one (where he's reading) because it didn't turn out too well.

Anyway, I'll be improving my Snake movie and resubmitting it (probably), so stay tuned!


Rated 2 / 5 stars


I heard only 2 little noises... why isn't there any suiting background music? that would really make it better... Like the typical superman sound when your hero starts his rise into space... not really a good movie, but acceptable

Lorkas responds:

is there a 40 second long song?


Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

Has potential...

...but needs to be longer. And there needs to be a better plot. And there needs music, as well as voices. Art wasn't terrible, but wasn't great either. Keep working, and you'll be better.

I saw potential, so I give you 2/5.

Lorkas responds:

Okay, thanks for the review.


Rated 1 / 5 stars

im lost

didnt make much sense to me >.<
no sound too

Lorkas responds:

There WAS sound.