well, the jokes told were fine, but the animation itself needed to be better!!!
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I spent about a month of off and on work on this. It is my first real flash besides a couple of 5 second long experiments. It's about two friends and their odd ninja-like sense of humor.
The jokes were alright but not extremely funny animation was alright too as well
Eh,yeah, I don't get it either. The ungetedness of the joke combined with the major injury is probably supposed to be the joke, but still... feels like you could have used some better pun. Nice adding some aftercredit animation btw, just to show everyone's alive and doing OK. :P Keep it going!
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lol, i liked the credits
no thans to my shitty comp for freezing, twilight princess for distracting me, and thanks to ninjas? lol i liked the joke too, and how hes still alive in the end, keep it up, still waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay better than i could do.
PBass responds:
Thanks for the review madhouse! Yeah, my old PC ran on windows ME, so it was quite a challenge to finish that project. My fingers were constantly pressing ctrl+S. I'm thinking about updating the voices in that later, they are way too fuzzy. Well, I'm very glad you liked it!
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I loved the sun! The plot was funny.. sort of.. the blood and stuff was kind of uncalled for, because it didn't add enough to balance out making me cringe.. Still, cool.
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