more needed
more needed. good for first but more work is needed. what last review stated. plus more continuity to story.
Author Comments
WARNING: If you don't like senseless animations, with senseless violence, don't watch this! This is my FIRST animation, so please consider this when rating Xp !
Well..........I'm quite new to Flash, so one day I decided to make a short animation, so i could check if i was making some progress. But then I thought: "hey! It would be nice if other people could see it and tell me if they like it or not!". So I decided to submit it to Newgrounds. Make critics and give suggestions so I can make better animations in the future. Oh! And if you're going to rate it, please be easy on it, because this is my FIRST ONE ok?
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AVISO: Se você não gosta de animações sem sentido, com violência sem sentido, não assista isso! Esta é a minha PRIMEIRA animação, então por favor levem isso em consideração quando estiverem votando Xp!
Bem.......Eu sou um pouco novo no Flash, então um dia eu decidi fazer uma curta animação, para que eu pudesse checar se eu estava progredindo. Mas aí eu pensei:"Ei! Seria legal se outras pessoas pudessem ver e me contar se gostaram ou não!". Então eu decidi colocá-la no Newgrounds. Façam criticas e deêm sugestões, para que eu possa fazer melhores animações no futuro. Ah! E se você for votar, por favor pegue leve, porque essa é a minha PRIMEIRA ok?
Very good
Very few first animations are this good. The improvements needed:
1. Smoother walking and falling motions.
2. More ways to die.
3. Possibly voiceovers.
lol
I don't belive it!
It's your first flash & it didn't crap ass!
Once you get some more practice make another, & make it longer with crazyer deaths
lol
That was pretty awesome for a 1st time. Keep up the good work.
Not Bad...
This was a good first go at flash. You have much potential and I wish you good luck if you continue making flash movies...
P.S: If you need any ideas, you can contact me on my NG account. :)