Not bad...
This was a pretty good flash sprite movie. Not as good as the first 1 but, I thought it was ok. This is the first time u had enemies fighting back. Thats a good idea for your future episodes. Nice work, and good luck...
Another short movie about River City Ransom!
This time featured by the Dragon Siamese Twins!
Not bad...
This was a pretty good flash sprite movie. Not as good as the first 1 but, I thought it was ok. This is the first time u had enemies fighting back. Thats a good idea for your future episodes. Nice work, and good luck...
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Another pretty good episode you have here. The siamese twins idea was kind of funny and original. I liked what you did with this.
^^Needs Improving^^
A little bit on the short side, even though it is supposed to be a short. Seems like your pumping these out pretty quickly...maybe you should put some more time and length into them.
v funny
yes very funny.......its spelt lives btw. to save you further humiliation
Shame
This pixel short had such potential and you just threw it all away. I really wanted to see where you would go with the Siamese twin story. At the very least, go back and add another minute of fighting, throw in some romantic dialog, do something.
It's okay.
- Pros -
Nice music.
- Cons -
Rather odd.
= Suggestions =
I think you should make it longer.