sweet
nice man. whens the next ones comin out i know its gonna be funny?
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FEEDBACK IS APPRECIATED!
This is the first two minutes of my new series: The Made Up Truth.
This is a MAJOR improvement over ep: .5, but i still have a ways to go...
Hope you like it, thanks for watching.
Edit: DANGIT! Why is it always JUST BELOW a three? lol...
Funny but Expected
Anytime you have Scorpion you know that joke is coming but it had some funny dialog along the way. The artwork could of had more detail, but I liked the animation style and the background noise. Maybe slightly better audio recording and some subtitles would also raise the bar.
ZeroXTAD responds:
Yea, your right, the scorpion joke was a little expected. BUT THE GUY HAS A JAVALIN IN HIS HAND!!! it almost begs for your attention...
An all i have to work with is a $10 mic from best buy, so good sound is sorta outta the question...
I'll try an get it right with the full episode.
Poor guy
Loosing his wife and all. Poor guy :p
Its great non the less. Hope to see more :D
ZeroXTAD responds:
Thats what the black tar does to your life... Don't do drugs kids!
but yea, thanks for watching, an i'm working on the whole episode now.
Wao, really NICE
I saw the lines not being attached at placed like their elbows and hands, but I've always had problems with that too, ha.
Great music.
ZeroXTAD responds:
Yea, i don't know how to fix that... got any pointers?
And i think i struck gold by finding the-humble-bees first, that track is NICE. An that last 2 second beat was me.
Thanks for watching.
Pretty good...
I thought it was gonna suck...but it was funny. Good job!
ZeroXTAD responds:
Thanks for watching it!
An i'm still in the process of figuring out what everybody on newgrounds thinks is funny...
... I need more time...
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