It looked good...
You are good with animating and have art skill, but your storytelling is EXTREMELY lacking. Put some more effort into a story and you could be quite good.
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Careful, Careful...you may spoil yourself if you haven't read the book...but then again, read more to spoil yourself^^ *hAhaAhaHaAHaaHaAhaA*
Potter is polymorphed
DumbleDumble Dies
Hermoine has a dirty Secret*giggle giggle*
don't ruin
it for the rest of us
Sigh...
We're gonna play the good-thing/bad-thing game. First, I'll point out a negative, then point out a positive. Negative: this flash is awful. There is no real story, everything is too unconnected, and the the kid is turned into a frog, then is himself of the deathstar, then is a frog getting sexed up by Hermione? What the hell?
Positive: It is obvious that your artisstic and animating abilities are quite good, and I think that if you put a little more thought into making it understandable, you could make some front-page material. You've got the talent, now make it count.
wtf?
0_o no point o well
Entertaining
But you could have kept Star Wars out of the picture. The necessary Star Wars/Lord of the Rings/The Matrix reference isn't always necessary.
