Did you do this at night or somthing?
I mean really, although it didnt really make the submission worse then what it is, it did seem to come off just a tad bit dark. Not to mention the huge file size. Anyway I still didint really find this that great. Sure you probebley worked hard on it and you added everything you have ever done, but you need to do something new, and that new thing is a story or definate character thing. Without it there isnt a real reason to watch your submissions. Well the submission wasnt to bad. Definatley worth the 3.5.