This a remake of one of my first animations.
I made this because I got board this morning, and I have been working on it on and off today, and now at 4 in the morning, I decided to submit it.
Be warned, it is 4 seconds long.
Reviews would be nice.
To short
I think newgrounds should like set a minimum length for time. This entry isn't so bad, it's just kind of a waste of space that this is all there is. Try adding length next time. The fbf buissness is pretty sweet, but you need better jokes and try to steer away from stick figures.
short but sweet
this was a good short flash. it was ok graphics but the plot if you could call it that was actually better then most of the flashes today that i have seen. it made me chuckle a little bit so thats also a plus. i guess criticism could be make the flash longer....
~Noujust
Shows Potential
The animation is actually quite good, it's way too short and isn't really that original, but this shows that you have potential.
Decent
Clever and short, and the author doesn't pretend it's anything but that. I can't tell if Gabe's art style is on purpose, but it looks messy.
Nice one!
I thought before i watched this:
"Oh another rubbish short clip to rate 0 on"
But this made me laugh!