I didnt like this at all but you have great animation skill you just need to make a better story line...i dont mean to offend you at all in this i just didnt like the falsh
No offense at all man, I really appreciate you taking the time to review. My style ain't for everyone.
daaauumn man! that was scary!
wicked cool, smooth animation with great secuences.and it was pretty dope, great job man!
Hey, thanks a lot for watching and reviewing! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Pretty good there buddy
I liked it a lot, smooth animation, the audio was good, everything about it was good. There is only one thing I think needs improvement, and that is the flow of the dialogue. In the beginning I think you were trying to portray some of the characters being a little slow witted, but the dialogue was way way too slow. Reaction time between the characters responses was also a little on the slow side. The dialogue itself was fine just needs a little tightening up. Cheers ^^
Great point, and I will definately take it into consideration with the second half! I'm glad you liked it and glad that you reviewed! Thanks for the help!
Well look at the pizza this way,its better than dominos.Lookin forward to the next one!
Just about anything is better than Dominos! I swear, that's some crap pizza.
Thanks a lot for the review bro!
Pure awesome :)
I really got into the story and characters were really likable, pretty much like watching a legit tv show sitcom thing.
Also the sound holy crap good job! Cant overlook the sound cause thats about the one thing that makes cartoons awesome great timing on the little melodies(like when the manager gets mad adn sprouts demon wings heavy metal plays lol) all the sounds around the floating manager were great, i laughed a lot. Great voices.
Ok i gotta throw in some cons here:
Graphics of the characters are great and detailed but i suppose you tried to give em realistic look by moving a lot of their body parts which left a kind of feeling as if they were floating rather than just chilling in one place so take it easy on the constant tweens or whatever it is that you prefer.
Ok ok im done ill go wait patiently for more i guess :(
The audio was really important. It's a big part of what makes a cartoon great. I am really glad that you liked the music! Aside from the song playing when Russel is warning the guys about the floating manager and that great blues lick from Chungadaddy, I did all the music. It took a while to score up some of the tracks, but I think that they worked out pretty well.
I'm gonna review a lot of the tweening in the second half before I put it up. You're right, they kinda seem like they're made out of jelly or something. I may have over-abused the whole tween thing a tad bit. (I'd better watch out for the tween police!)
Anyway, thanks for the great review! And don't worry, I'm busting my ass working on the conclusion!!!
MAKE A PIZZA!!!