Don't see much wrong..
Don't listen to the other reviews... this is pretty funny. maybe make this a wee bit longer - I understand that you were in a flood. Good animation 8/10
Author Comments
Apologies for the terrible editing I did... I was going to add voices but I couldn't be assed..
If you havent been watching the news I'm situated in Gloucester England, where everywhere is under about 2-3 foot of river water and at this present moment in time we have no running water.. so I made this for a friend whilst I'm waiting for the power to cut off too...
God I'm cool....
Future reference..
Thanks for blamming this..
:) Oni xxx
Endin....
I thought it was funny at tha end but pretty much like every1 said theres no plot and it was very short but i did like tha animation
P.s. mayb u should get it a name....=).....jus a suggestion
crappy, but not THAT crappy
uhh, ya it sucks
but the quality of the animation was not terrible.
there was no plot and it was really short, if there was actually somthing to the animation then it could be decent.
Add-Oni responds:
Cheers for signing up a week ago.. not submitting anything then critisizing my work...
If you didnt read the information I have 3 hours to do this in whilst i was waiting fora power cut... half my city is under water and i needed to do something to take my mind off of it..
so yeah... thanks...
I'm sorry, I guess
Despite your best intentions, I don't think this was all that bad. Yes, the ending sucks, but there were some decent "shots" between the filler and that. If you're trying to fail, you need to try harder. Unfortunately, if you're trying to succeed and that was just self-effacing BS, you also need to try harder. Right now this is just "meh". With the current scoring system, "meh" passes the portal pretty easily. Hell, "slightly sub-meh" still passes. Good luck!
not bad
what song did you use?
Add-Oni responds:
I have no clue what the songs called, It's from the Spiderman 2 theatrical Trailer.. I think there's the word Luminosa or somthing similar in the title.