Decent
:D Decent Game
Author Comments
Fight against the computer. A great time waster. Nothing more. Nothing less.
I no longer have the .fla (file in which I made this game) for this game, or I would improve. I have learned a lot since I made this. I am sorry.
ALSO KEEP IN MIND: This is one of the first things I have ever made, it is not near what I can do now.
I WILL RELEASE new game soon! I almost have the engine done actually.
Hang tight.
+RM
RiotFlash responds:
Thanks, :D
Not bad :D
Well, its not 1# on newgrounds stuff but atleast it's enjoyable. The only thing you need to change is to have the aiming done by the mouse and shooting with left mouse. Also maybe a background and some walking animations and thats close to being it.
Good work though :D
RiotFlash responds:
Shooting with the mouse. Why didn't I think of that?
yeah...
you need to improve on the animation.
the game is okay, but its boring.
1 level....
boring.
it was allright though.
i could never script anything like this.
7/10
4/5
It's was ok...
Like what the others said, you still need to patch up some stuff. Instead of doing that funky way of walking why doon't you use the manual arrow key codes. What I mean is this:
onClipEvent (load) {
speed = 8;
}
onClipEvent (enterFrame) {
if (Key.isDown(Key.UP)) {
this._y-=speed;
} else if (Key.isDown(Key.DOWN)) {
this._y+=speed;
} else if (Key.isDown(Key.RIGHT)) {
this._x+=speed;
} else if (Key.isDown(Key.LEFT)) {
this._x-=speed;
}
}
Change to the speed for how fast you want it. Also change where the missle comes out meaning insead of having the circle (the "circle is your hittest you find it by pressing Q) in the middle so it looks like the missle is coming out of his body. You should have it at the edge of the gun.
Oh yeah, fix up the menu! Lolz.
Unfornatly you don't have this flash file but at least for future games you can use this :).
RiotFlash responds:
With that code, the aiming would suck. With that code you can aim only eight directions, with mine you can aim unlimited directions. I had a ton of errors. Such as the gun thing, the bad menu, all of that fun stuff. My next works, will have nice menus. I promise!
Nice..
But alot was lacking.
- Add a background.
- Modify controls (going faster would be nice).
- Add more options, maybe mouse control?
- Improve character detail.
- Add proper menus
But still, it was good. And with practise you could be alot better.
RiotFlash responds:
-Add a background
I do have one. Its supposed to be snow. Lazy XD.
-Modify Controls
I just learned how to make a turbo button. I didnt at the time.
-Add more options
Yet another good idea.
-Improve character detail
I suck at drawing. I am trying to improve.
-Add proper menus
Yeah, I suppose I should of.
Great review. It had a nice list of things to improve. Very helpful.