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I thought this was quite good despite its low score. The backgrounds were very interesting to watch throughout the game. They were very colorful and creative. The game play was simple enough, yet a bit challenging. It would have been nice to have checkpoints in this though. It's quite annoying starting over all the time.

Exceeded my Expectations !

When i first saw : "This is my first swing at a flash game and my first submission to NG." I was about to bail. Believe me! But i gave it a shot because i read the reviews and they seemed to like it.

I loved the backgrounds! There so original and qwurky.
And like "skylinedfire" says "Make them more insane" im begging you!!

But i must say the game play was abit rugged and slow but if you get better at flash then im sure you can pull something out the bag because you have true potentional!

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Surprisingly good.

Like everyone else said: add some audio, sound effects, and get the game to play a little more smoothly.

As for your crazy ass backgrounds and whatnot: those are awesome. Keep those, make them more insane. It was so fun to see what I would get to next. I do believe I quit at the elephant's trunk, because I was sure I'd never make that arcing leap off the pyramid again.

Fix it up, and it'll be pretty damn fun.

Not too bad :)

It was a bit slow going, but you have a good concept! I realize this was your first flash game and believe me! I have seen much worse. Just keep at it and try to improve your gameplay, graphics, and audio a bit! Keep working at it and you can have a great game! Let me know if there is anything I can help you with, and maybe we could collab sometime! Keep at it!

Good Idea...

It was ok but it was a nice concept. If you could make it faster and maybe some physics to make it a little more interesting.